Salvation By Langston Hughes

What Worked well

• the author painted a picture for us
• the detailing made you feel like you were there
• caught your attention and held it
• there was a point to the experience
• the reader knew his real feelings

Didn't work well

• the ending of the story
• there wasn't dialogue that the actually author said 
• it seemed too short
• the story as a whole didn't leave me satisfied

The story did keep me engaged but I felt like it was building up to something I knew was going to happen. It was easy to picture what it loloked like for Langston and what it sounded like. I think his purpose was to give readers an insight as to why he doesn't believe in Jesus.